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 Post subject: Dela Eden
PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2022 10:19 am 

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Every Joe #206: Dela Eden

Devil's Due was a mixed bag.

The writing lacked any military bearing, something necessary for writing about a military team.

Where it succeeded was making substantial story structure changes; whether the changes were good or bad is subjective. Devils' Due other success was introducing new characters.

With Dela Eden, Devil's Due did both. A new character who brought about a substantial change- by killing Lady Jaye.


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 Post subject: Re: Dela Eden
PostPosted: Sat Aug 20, 2022 4:15 am 
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More great work.

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 Post subject: Re: Dela Eden
PostPosted: Sat Aug 20, 2022 2:57 pm 
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Another character new to me. I dig her she looks right out of a 90s movie. Kind of a mash up of the 2 final faction ladies too.

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 Post subject: Re: Dela Eden
PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2022 8:58 am 

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Thanks, guys!
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