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MobileBattleBunker
 Post subject: Fanfic - MBB's Special Missions
PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 1:00 am 
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Hey guys!

So I am unemployed right now and my friends say that I need to work on a project to keep my mind off of the duldrum. I figured I would work on a Fanfic until something better comes ups. So my goal is to write a Special Missions type book. What I would like from you folks is post the names of three to five Joes and two Cobra named characters, or a setting.

Steve

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DarkJedi
 Post subject: Re: Fanfic - MBB's Special Missions
PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 1:27 am 
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MobileBattleBunker wrote:
What I would like from you folks is post the names of three to five Joes and two Cobra named characters, or a setting.

Steve


Joes
-Mayday (Urban Warfare/Marksman)
-Bombstrike (CounterIntell/Communications)
-Firewall (Computer Technology)

Cobras
Vypra Twins (Ninjas)

Setting
Arbco resort?

Idea/Premise
The three Joes go undercover (Charlie's Angels' style) to investigate an exclusive resort where famous female celebrities/scientists have never returned from. Is the spa a secret Cobra front? Are the twin female instructors actually the Vypra Twins?

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 Post subject: Re: Fanfic - MBB's Special Missions
PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 2:02 am 
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Could work! - they need a Bosley -type character.

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 Post subject: Re: Fanfic - MBB's Special Missions
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MobileBattleBunker wrote:
Could work! - they need a Bosley -type character.


Maybe they just report to Spirit. :lol:

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 Post subject: Re: Fanfic - MBB's Special Missions
PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 2:33 am 
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I am thinking a forward with Lady Jaye, Cover Girl and Scarlet where they conclude - "We're too old for this..."

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