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 Post subject: She-Hulk Artwork
PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 11:13 am 
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Here's an old She-Hulk drawing I finally got around to inking and coloring! Hope you guys like this also - any constructive criticism and critiquing would be greatly appreciated! :)
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 Post subject: Re: She-Hulk Artwork
PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 11:21 am 
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i like it (i'm a sucker for shulkie)

if i could make one remark, i think the head might be a little small --

and the breasts... but that's probably just my preference... :monocle:

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 Post subject: Re: She-Hulk Artwork
PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 11:48 am 
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I tried to draw he head in proportion to how tall and muscular she is! :) As to the boobs - I get a lot of suggestions on them! hahaha Thanks for the feedback!

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 Post subject: Re: She-Hulk Artwork
PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 2:54 pm 
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The legs look a little too long.

I know Marvel tends to show her towering over all the others, but if you were to take about 3-4 inches off of her, shorten the legs a smidge.

Right now she has more of a basketball players body instead of a muscular woman that stands x feet tall.

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 Post subject: Re: She-Hulk Artwork
PostPosted: Fri May 07, 2010 4:04 pm 
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I agree with both but I think the problem is that the upper half of her body was based on one thing and then the lower half was based on another. The legs don't look proportionate to the rest her which is making her head look way too small in the process. The talent is there though so keep it up.

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