I like the story - again, I like the concept of a new kind of Ranger. And I love anything with a futuristic cowboy theme. I also like the figure. It gives an awesome early 80's comic character vibe, which is definitely in your wheelhouse. The only thing I don't feel as good about probably comes down to the New Earth angle. I assume you are making this in the New Earth story style that is all over HT, and that whatever it's called Sector 13? If so, the one thing I really dig about that verse is the gritty and dark tones. Your story and figure are very cool, but he is visually neither gritty nor dark, so he seems out of place to me.
That isn't a critique of the job you did on him, more of an observation. And I might also be incorrect in the context you are making him.
Regardless, I'm glad to see you back posting new stuff here.
EDIT: just saw pluv's post, and the 'stache would be a great idea. and maybe a friend named Doc for him too.
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Kwinn_Lives wrote:
you have now won more JCAs than anyone in the history of the award.
Mysterious Stranger wrote:
You sir are the definition of a Renaissance Nerd... you do it all so damn well.