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 Post subject: Soy un perdedor: Jensen & Roque
PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 1:40 am 
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Finally got around to doing some more work on my Losers... this time up: Jensen & Roque

Jensen:
Head: Buzzer & Televiper
Torso: Beach Head
Arms: forgotten
Legs: CCommander Combo
Coat: Star Wars Walrus Man
Misc. Gun & RoC Laptop
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Roque:
Head: Cast from pluv (TriGate?)
Torso: MARS Trooper or NEO Viper
Legs, Arms: Beach Head
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 Post subject: Re: Soy un perdedor: Jensen & Roque
PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 8:51 am 
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Both are well done, but I love the design on Jensen. Very cool looking!

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 Post subject: Re: Soy un perdedor: Jensen & Roque
PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 9:10 am 
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Yeah, Jensen rocks. Love the coat parts, and you did a great job on his hair.

Something about Roque seems off to me though. Maybe the eyes? It's overall close, and maybe I'd like it more if I wasn't already wowed by Jensen.

edit: aren't the arms from ROC Trenchcoat Snake Eyes?

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 Post subject: Re: Soy un perdedor: Jensen & Roque
PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 9:17 am 
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I'm 100% sold on Jensen- great looking figure. (POC arms??)

Roque- the eyes are too large. Other then that it's a solid figure.

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 Post subject: Re: Soy un perdedor: Jensen & Roque
PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 11:54 am 
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Great work on Jensen! Love the detail color in his hair you did.
(my minor crit is I think his neck looks too long in the back, or it might be too thin)

Roque, I like the scar detail on the face. You almost lose it in with the skin tone though. Maybe highlight it a bit more so it stands out?
I think it might be because his eyes are looking to the left that it kind of looks off as well. We're not used to seeing that. ;)

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 Post subject: Re: Soy un perdedor: Jensen & Roque
PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 1:05 pm 

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nice paint apps on both of them. Don't know who they are though. Jensen's hair looks great and those are trenchcoat SEs arms.
Roque's eyes are too big is what I think it is


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 Post subject: Re: Soy un perdedor: Jensen & Roque
PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:15 pm 
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Thanks for the kind comments & critiques everybody!

I agree with the assessment of Roque's eyes being on the large side, I was trying out that eye painting technique of starting with black, then white, and i got too much black... which meant too much white to cover it, and so on. I went off center with the first pupil, too -- so i just decided to have him looking off to the left, instead of straight on.... and for those of you familiar with the story, that turns out pretty apropos...

With all the washing and dull-coat, the scar over his eye doesn't pop like it originally did -- i might have to drag a red-der line down the center to bring some of that back.

mostly Roque was a boring-ly attired character -- and was a boring custom... i was pretty happy with the way he turned out, just from the simple fact that the custom has *some* character to it --

I'm satisfied with Jensen. that custom got parted out a half-dozen different ways, with the only two constants being the buzzer head (sans ponytail, used in upcoming custom) and the walrus man jacket. one hurdle i keep coming up against (trying to use the cc legs) is the left thigh piece. i've used the tiger force duke in this case, but it doesn't want to sit in the beach head socket very well. i also was going to use a button shirt for him (to be more true to the comic) but i didn't want a Clay clone.

edit: also, thanks for ID'ing those arms -- they're the same ones I used for Clay, and couldn't remember where they came from then, either!

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 Post subject: Re: Soy un perdedor: Jensen & Roque
PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:39 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Soy un perdedor: Jensen & Roque
PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:46 pm 
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I'm digging the whole originality of the source material. They scream, as does the other one you did.

On the eye thing, another good fix is always keeping flesh, or a flesh just a hair darker handy when doing the whites of the eyes to narrow them bit by bit. A shade darker helps simulate shadow, when there is none.

But I'm still loving the design and the body uses. Sold me immediately.

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