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BL4CK5H33P
 Post subject: BL4CK5H33P's YAKfinities entry - Cloud City Denizens - Jayla
PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2012 12:58 pm 
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Have been itchin' to enter a YAKfinities since I registered @ YAKFACE... these contests showcase some of the best & most creative customs @ YAKFACE. A brief history before I debut my 1st YAKfinities submission... I had found a Blu-Ray edition Episode5 ESB 4-pk (w/ a Hoth Leia) @ my local K-Mart on clearance for $9.50 --- then I happened upon a VC Zam Wessel @ Marshall's for $5.00 --- then I found a Sandstorm Leia @ WalMart (paid retail - $9.89) So, these were the 3 basic figs that comprise this custom... w/o further adieu...
The Corellian female known as Jaylah Mandrey, was a former Special Invesigator for Corporate Sector Authority. After many years of service with the CSA, she became disillusioned with the gross corruption she witnessed within the force. She offered her considerable talents as a private security contractor for a while, before finding herself as Chief Security Officer of Gaming Industries for Cloud City. Jaylah is the law in Cloud City when it comes to it's gambling facilities... she answers only to Lobot & Administrator Calrissian. She is the ultimate pitboss, overseeing the peaceful progression of daily wagering & discouraging players from cheating or disruptive behavior, along with providing security escort for many of the gamblers who frequent Cloud City's gaming tables. She is a devastatingly fast draw & deadly accurate when business turns to the elegently lethal end of the spectrum. Gaming Indusries is Cloud City's 2nd largest source of revenue & she protects that resource very well...

SIDENOTE: Jaylah has always had an uncanny ability to "sense" things before they happen, she was unaware of the ambush that the Empire had setup for the crew of the Millenium Falcon & she experienced an uncontrollable illness that coincided with Lord Vader's arrival & had departed Cloud City for medical treatment during these events.

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JBYRDD
 Post subject: Re: BL4CK5H33P's YAKfinities entry - Cloud City Denizens - J
PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2012 2:17 pm 
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Wish you wouldn't have used the T crotch, but other than that, she's a home run, very cool work putting her together.

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BL4CK5H33P
 Post subject: Re: BL4CK5H33P's YAKfinities entry - Cloud City Denizens - J
PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2012 4:06 pm 
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JBYRDD wrote:
Wish you wouldn't have used the T crotch, but other than that, she's a home run, very cool work putting her together.


^^^ Yeah, I always regret havin' to make the decision to use a T-crotch - but I tried VERY hard to use exclusively SW parts for this b/c it is for a contest on a SW site I think the only nonSW parts on this are the hair bun w/ the chopstick & the packs I added to the rear belt... THNX for the praise tho :-D ...

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 Post subject: Re: BL4CK5H33P's YAKfinities entry - Cloud City Denizens - J
PostPosted: Wed Apr 18, 2012 5:04 pm 
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Nice custom and +1 for the use of the word 'denizen'...

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