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iwbeta
 Post subject: Iceberg, Sneak Peek, Battle Commander Hawk & Stalker
PostPosted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 6:17 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Iceberg, Sneak Peek, Battle Commander Hawk & Stalker
PostPosted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 6:23 pm 
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Wow... Sneak Peek is a lot easier than I thought he'd be. That's a somewhat simple design, but totally works. Might have to tackle him now. The rest are winners too!

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 Post subject: Re: Iceberg, Sneak Peek, Battle Commander Hawk & Stalker
PostPosted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:39 pm 
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Production quality, as always. Battle Commander Stalker is my favorite- just one I wouldn't imagine seeing.

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 Post subject: Re: Iceberg, Sneak Peek, Battle Commander Hawk & Stalker
PostPosted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:16 pm 
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Iceberg is my fave. They are all very clean.

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 Post subject: Re: Iceberg, Sneak Peek, Battle Commander Hawk & Stalker
PostPosted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:31 pm 

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All look good, but I really like that Hawk custom. Very good paint job.
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 Post subject: Re: Iceberg, Sneak Peek, Battle Commander Hawk & Stalker
PostPosted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 10:50 pm 
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Fantastic stuff.

My only critique would be the red logo on Iceberg. I look at his arms and the left one has a raised circle that just sticks out when the right one has the logo instead...

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 Post subject: Re: Iceberg, Sneak Peek, Battle Commander Hawk & Stalker
PostPosted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 11:43 pm 
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Love the way you captured the comic/toyness of the originals here.
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 Post subject: Re: Iceberg, Sneak Peek, Battle Commander Hawk & Stalker
PostPosted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 12:38 am 
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I would have added the talking backpacks if I could get working ones without selling my first born.
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 Post subject: Re: Iceberg, Sneak Peek, Battle Commander Hawk & Stalker
PostPosted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 10:50 am 
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Jay wrote:
Fantastic stuff.

My only critique would be the red logo on Iceberg. I look at his arms and the left one has a raised circle that just sticks out when the right one has the logo instead...
I agree. It makes more sense to use the existing flat surface because now the logo on the opposite arm makes that flat surface stand out even more.

Sneak Peek looks really good. That is one Hasbro could do for sure.

TBC General Hawk looks just as tacky and just as cool as the original.

TBC Stalker, the face is a little rough. The mustache is veering to far into the fake mustache realm. The body and sculpting on the leg look great though.

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 Post subject: Re: Iceberg, Sneak Peek, Battle Commander Hawk & Stalker
PostPosted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 12:41 pm 
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Very well done. Only crit is Stalker's face. Something is wrong with it.

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 Post subject: Re: Iceberg, Sneak Peek, Battle Commander Hawk & Stalker
PostPosted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:14 pm 
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Rambo wrote:
Very well done. Only crit is Stalker's face. Something is wrong with it.


Ummm, did you ever see the horrible original? http://www.yojoe.com/action/91/stalker3.shtml

This custom is much better.

Nice work on all, btw...

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 Post subject: Re: Iceberg, Sneak Peek, Battle Commander Hawk & Stalker
PostPosted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 6:24 pm 

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like iceberg and hawk. Stalker his head and beret look a bit big to me
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