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 Post subject: Gi joe visits Shadow Moses(added pt #2)
PostPosted: Sun Nov 04, 2007 10:27 pm 

Joined: Fri Jun 29, 2007 11:18 am
Location: Georgia.
Not entirely sure if this is the right place to post this or not. But, i'm a huge fan of Gi joe and Metal Gear Solid. So, with a little encouragement from a friend.. i decided to wright a Gi joe/Metal Gear Solid fan fiction story! here we go.

Gi joe visits Shadow Moses
(Gi joe/Metal Gear Solid fan fiction)

A camera shot from above Gi joe head-quarters, and then fades to show Duke standing in front of a large Computer, with all the Gi joe members lined up before him, Duke starts his speech.

Duke: “Approximetly 2 hours ago, Gi joe intercepted satellite images of a small structure on a small island in Alaska. We fear this could be a new Cobra facility. Therefore, we’re loading up a small Gi joe team to go out and investigate. When I call your name, please step forward.”

Duke shouted out a few names. “Frostbite!”. Frostbite steps forward.

“Snake eyes!” Snake eyes steps forward.

“Scarlett!” Scarlett steps forward.

“Roadblock!” Roadblock steps forward.

“OK, including me. We have enough members. Team! Grab the weapons you need, and meet me in the vehicle hanger. Dismissed.”


Meanwhile, at Shadow Moses.

“ARGAAAAAAA!!!!!”

“How do you like this little machine, Snake?” Ocelot says with a sadistic voice.

Snake: “Wouldn’t be too bad if it had a little padding and a nice fluffy pillow”

Ocelot: “Ha ha ha. Lets go again, shall we?”

Ocelot punches in a few buttons on his computer, and electricity starts flowing through Snakes body.

“ARGHAAA!”

Ocelot: “Hmph. Guess that’s all for now.”

The door comes open, and Liquid steps through.

Liquid: “Ocelot. Seems like we have some new company approaching.”

Ocelot: “Who is it?”

Liquid: “We picked them up on Radar. No word yet on who it is, I’ve sent out a few Genome Soldiers to check it out.”

Ocelot: “Think the US is sending out someone else at an attempt to stop us?”

Liquid: “Who knows. Those US idiots, you can’t predict them”

Ocelot: “Liquid, I’ve got some “friends” that I would like you to meet”

Liquid: “Who are they? Some of your Russian friends?”

Ocelot: “No, they are another organization that needs Metal Gear. I have an idea”

Liquid: “Tell me later, I have some business to attend to. See you later, brother”

Liquid then leaves, and Ocelot calls in two guards to take Solid back to his cell.

Solid Snake opens his eyes, to find that he is in a cell, with a patrolling guard outside, who won’t take his eyes off of him.

“BEEP. BEEP. BEEP. BEEP”

Campbell: Snake! Are you alright?

Snake: “I’ve been better. But at least I’m alive.”

Campbell: “Good to hear.”

Snake: “Colonel, Ocelot said something about having some “friends” he wanted Liquid to meet, what’s this all about?”

Campbell: “I have no idea. Snake, whatever they mean by it. You can’t let it get in your way in the mission.”

Snake: “Colonel, are you hiding something from me?!”

Campbell: “Snake, its not like I know everything either. I’m just your support in this mission, I have no access to the complete file.”

Snake: “I don’t believe you”

Campbell: “Snake, I...”

Snake: “The hell with you!”


Back with Gi Joe.

Duke: Scarlett, what is your status in Ice saber #3?”

Scarlett: “All good here Duke”

Duke: “Alright. Approaching the small island. Might be best to stop here and take a rest. And to see if we can see that structure from here.”

All of the Ice Sabers stop, and the Gi joe’s on the mission climb out all bundled up in snow gear. Duke pulls out his binoculars to check the area.

Duke: “I can’t see the base from here. We might have to get two members of the team to go and scout. If that is a Cobra base, they could detect a vehicle approaching.”

Little do they know, that it isn’t a Cobra base, but Shadow Moses island! With FOX-HOUND in charge of the base.

Duke: “Snake eyes, you and I will go out and scout the area. Scarlett, Roadblock, and Frostbite. You stay here and watch the Ice Sabers. If anything goes wrong, give us a call.”


Duke and Snake eyes go out into the never ending snow field, not knowing what they may run in to.

Duke lies down and gets out his binoculars.

Duke: “Doesn’t look like a Cobra base. I see a few sentry’s posted around the area, but I can’t see them well enough to tell you if their Cobra guards or not. Might have to get in closer”


Back at Shadow Moses.

The scene shows Liquid standing in an office type room. Then, all of a sudden, a Guard blasts through the door!

Guard: “Sir! The prisoner has escaped!”

Liquid: “What?! You weren’t watching him?!”

Guard: “Sir. I’m sorry, I turned my head for a minute and he was gone”

Liquid: “Hmph.. He can’t get too far without his gear. But, you have failed me. You know what must be done.”

Guard: “Sir?”

Liquid pulls out a pistol his trench coat, and points it at the guards head.

Liquid: “You can’t be a good enough soldier to watch a prisoner inside a locked cell. Your not a good enough soldier for me”

Liquid pulls the trigger and the guard falls to the ground. About that time. Ocelot walks through the door.

Ocelot: “Liquid. They’ve arrived”

Liquid: “Bring them in!”

Ocelot: “Liquid, I’d like you to meet Cobra Commander!”

To be continued.....


Let me know what you fellas think, thanks!

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"We're not tools of the Government, or anyone else. Fighting was the only thing, the only thing I was good at. But at least I always fought for what I believed in"--Gray Fox--Metal Gear Solid


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 Post subject: Re: Gi joe visits Shadow Moses pt #1
PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 3:15 pm 

Joined: Tue Jun 26, 2007 10:19 am
I can't see Liqued working with anyone.........great read though

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 Post subject: Re: Gi joe visits Shadow Moses pt #1
PostPosted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 9:35 pm 

Joined: Fri Jun 29, 2007 11:18 am
Location: Georgia.
UPDATE! adding Gi joe visits Shadow Moses pt #2!

Gi joe visits Shadow Moses #2
(Gi joe/Metal Gear Solid fan fiction)

Last time, in “Gi joe visits Shadow Moses”. The Gi joe team embarked on a mission to investigate a mysterious structure on a small island in Alaska.

And, at Shadow Moses. Solid Snake was being tortured by FOX-HOUND’s “Revolver Ocelot”. While being tortured, Snake heard Ocelot tell Liquid Snake that he had some “Friends” he wanted him to meet. Snake escapes, and the guard watching Snake was killed. Ocelot came in the room to introduce his “Friends”.

Ocelot: “Liquid, I’d like you do meet Cobra Commander.”

Liquid: “Cobra.. Commander?”

Ocelot: “Yes, he is the leader of the ‘Cobra’ Organization.”

Cobra Commander: “Ah, Liquid Snake. I’ve heard great things about you from Ocelot here. You have the capability to launch Nuclear missiles?:

Liquid: “Yes. We will launch if the US does not give into our demands.”

Cobra Commander: “What were the demands?”

Liquid: “I don’t think that’s any of your business, now is it?”

Cobra Commander: “Fine, as you wish.”

Cobra Commander walks out of the room seeming angry.

Ocelot: “Liquid. If we could perhaps join forces with them, We could prove more of a threat to the US.”

Liquid: “Ocelot, don’t be ridiculous! I think we prove more than enough threat with Metal Gear”

Ocelot looks at Liquid angrily, then walks out of the room.


Meanwhile. With Gi joe.

Duke: “Snake eyes, lets head back to the Ice Sabers. I don’t see anything out here.”

Snake eyes nods his head. Then begins to walk behind Duke back to the Ice Sabers.

All of a sudden, Duke and Snake eyes get rushed by 3 Genome Soliders.

Genome Soldier #1: “Freeze!”

Duke looks at Snake eyes and smiles, and nods his head.

Snake eyes leaps up into the air, pulling out his sword and slashing and killing two of the Genome Soldiers. Duke pulls out his pistol and begins shooting at the other Genome soldier, killing him instantly.

Duke: “Snake eyes! Hurry! Lets get back to the Ice sabers!”

Duke and Snake run back toward the Ice Sabers, to find that Scarlett and the rest of the team are safe.

Duke: “Scarlett! Get in the Ice Saber. I don’t think that structure is a Cobra base. We’re gonna go take a closer inspection. Lets go!”

Duke, Scarlett, and the rest of the team hop into the Ice sabers and begin going toward the unknown base.


Back at Shadow Moses.

“BEEP. BEEP. BEEP. BEEP.”

Campbell: “Snake! Did you manage to escape?”

Snake: “Yeah. But I think they’ve found out I escaped. The place is crawling with guards”

Campbell: “Make sure you don’t get caught. Do you have your equipment?”

Snake: “Yeah. I got it back in the torture room.”

Campbell: “Good to hear. Now, make your way to the Underground base where Metal Gear is being housed”

Snake: “Got it. Going to the underground base”

Snake goes to the elevator to go down toward the underground base. But the elevator isn’t working. Snake goes down to check out the stairs to find that they are destroyed. Snake goes back up to the elevator, but here’s a noise around the corner. Snake jumps out around the corner with his gun in hand.

Otacon: “Wait! Snake, its me. Wait!”

Otacon switches off his Stealth camouflage to show Snake that its him.

After there talk, Snake begins his journey to get to Metal Gear. Only running into a Hind D. With none other than Liquid Snake inside!

Liquid: “Brother! Its not over, not yet.”

Snake: “Why are you calling me brother! Who the hell are you?!”

Liquid: “I’m YOU! I’m your shadow. Asked the father that you killed. I’ll send you to hell to meet him!”

The chopper then flies of Snakes head. Snake pulls out his Stinger launcher, and he begins the battle.

Snake fires many Stinger missiles at the chopper, hitting in several times.. Finally. He takes it down.

Liquid: “Come on! Fly!”

The chopper starts going haywire. Sending Liquid down.

Liquid: “SNAAAAAAAAAAKE!”

A huge explosion erupts shaking the entire building.

Snake: “That takes care of the cremation”

Snake then continues his journey to get to Metal Gear. The elevators working now, all he’s gotta do is press the button and he’s off. But he goes inside the elevator, and the weight limit goes off. This puzzles snake.

“BEEP. BEEP. BEEP. BEEP”

Otacon: “Snake. The elevators working now”

Snake: “I know. You fixed it?”

Otacon: “No, that’s the weird thing. It just started moving by itself”

Snake: “By the way, did the weight limit warning go off when you were in it?”

Otacon: “Yeah, that’s another weird thing”

Snake: “How much do you weigh?”

Otacon: “About.. 135. But that elevator has a weight limit of 500 pounds or more. But there’s something else that bothers me. There were five prototype stealth camo’s back at the lab. If you take out the one I’m wearing that leaves 4.”

Snake: “What is this, first grade math?”

Otacon: “I went back to get you one, and they were missing.”

Snake: “Wonder who could have took them?”

Otacon: “Snake! Those guys who stole my Stealth camo prototypes are in there with you!”

Snake then ends the Codec transmission with Otacon. And he hears someone say “Freeze!”

A battle erupts on the elevator. Snake succsesfully defeated all four of the invisible men. And continued his mission to find Metal Gear.

To be continued....

Next time: Gi joe visits Shadow Moses #3. “Cobra recruits a new member!”

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"We're not tools of the Government, or anyone else. Fighting was the only thing, the only thing I was good at. But at least I always fought for what I believed in"--Gray Fox--Metal Gear Solid


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