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Dusty79
 Post subject: Dr. Venom
PostPosted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 8:38 am 
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So here is how I see this version of Dr. Venom occurring. After he is blown up by Kwinn's grenade, he isn't really buried. Cobra Commander secretly keeps him alive in a classified project, even Dr. Mindbender is kept out of the loop. His body is kept alive in a stasis chamber created by Destro and his mind is kept viable by leaving him plugged into the Brainwave Scanner. Eventually, Cobra gains the technology to build him a new robotic body based on B.A.T. technology. When he awakens as a cyborg, he is ready to jump right back into his role for Cobra.

If you see any areas for improvement let me know.


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ben1138
 Post subject: Re: Dr. Venom
PostPosted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 8:56 am 

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Very cool. He looks frightening.

Where does that coat come from?
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Dusty79
 Post subject: Re: Dr. Venom
PostPosted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 8:59 am 
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ben1138 wrote:
Very cool. He looks frightening.

Where does that coat come from?



The coat is from the Amazon Renegades 4 pack Snake Eyes.

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 Post subject: Re: Dr. Venom
PostPosted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 9:36 am 
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where's the head from?
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 Post subject: Re: Dr. Venom
PostPosted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 10:32 am 
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very cool take on him.

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 Post subject: Re: Dr. Venom
PostPosted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 11:14 am 
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Mainframe wrote:
where's the head from?



The head is the ROC Cobra Commander with the clear mask ripped off and a few mods made to cover the hole and indentations left after the mask came off.

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 Post subject: Re: Dr. Venom
PostPosted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 11:45 am 

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a good backstory for him. it work
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 Post subject: Re: Dr. Venom
PostPosted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 11:51 am 
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I like it a lot. I know Dr Venom has quite the following, but visually he's just a regular dude in a lab coat. I don't need my mad scientists to be all out Minderbenders, but a bit more than realistic scientist would be nice. This is definitely a direction I appreciate for Dr Venom, and a great use of a nice figure who just doesn't represent Cobra Commander.

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 Post subject: Re: Dr. Venom
PostPosted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 12:00 pm 
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I agree with everything Scramble says. Plus, nice backstory integration -

Also, get this into the gallery - I want to nominate it for "best use of a bad part" for using that head!

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Dusty79
 Post subject: Re: Dr. Venom
PostPosted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 12:13 pm 
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I'm glad he is being well recieved. Truth is, I probably never would have thought of this without the suggestions I asked for on my Overkill WIP. Its amazing what some brainstorming Joe Custom guys come up with. I think it was ben1138 that first suggested Dr. Venom being brought back inide a cyborg body. Thanks man.

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 Post subject: Re: Dr. Venom
PostPosted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 10:46 pm 

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You're welcome! The positive response to my idea (and then this well-executed custom) really picked up my day.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 19, 2013 11:02 pm 

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Hell yeah I can dig it!

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 Post subject: Re: Dr. Venom
PostPosted: Wed Mar 20, 2013 1:28 am 
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yup he looks great, put him fighting Chiefs updated Quinn and that would be a pretty great two pack.

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