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 Post subject: Raven and a Falcon re-paint
PostPosted: Tue Apr 16, 2013 4:06 pm 
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Raven: Andre Black, was a pretty normal kid growing up in Harlem N.Y. played basketball, football, baseball and stickball to name a few. He grew up in the shadow of his neighborhood church Pastored by Paul Wilson the father of is good friend Sam Wilson (The Falcon). Despite his friends dislike for the church, having a relationship with God was important to Andre. Years pass and Pastor Wilson and is wife are both killed sending his good friend Sam into the depth of grief, causing him to leave Harlem.
Andre goes on to College in Baltimore attending Bowie St. College where he studied Criminal Justice and later became one Baltimore’s finest. Andre moved quickly up the ranks and became one the youngest officers to become a detective. Andre also quickly learned that not ever cop was a good cop. Around the same time his good friend Sam had become the Falcon and was fighting crime alongside the earth mightiest Hero’s the Avengers.
Right about the same time the Baltimore Ravens win the Super Bowl. The light goes on and Andre knows what he has to do. He contacts his friend the Falcon, and a new legend is Born Raven! Raven’s wings are made out the same material that Falcon’s are made of, he also has Dart launchers on bath wrist and a utility belt with extra dart mags on it.
Together they form 2/3 of the Birds of Prey team.
Ok so I may change the name of the team depending on what other charaters I add.
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 Post subject: Re: Raven and a Falcon re-paint
PostPosted: Tue Apr 16, 2013 4:27 pm 

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 Post subject: Re: Raven and a Falcon re-paint
PostPosted: Tue Apr 16, 2013 4:50 pm 
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Really dig Raven.

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 Post subject: Re: Raven and a Falcon re-paint
PostPosted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 12:06 am 
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You gotta have the third one be 'Seahawk'. Make him a former Navy chopper pilot (to give him the experience in the air) along with being a amateur hang glider.

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 Post subject: Re: Raven and a Falcon re-paint
PostPosted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 7:56 am 
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Really nice work, man.

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 Post subject: Re: Raven and a Falcon re-paint
PostPosted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 10:00 am 
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Were I to see that black raven in the store, I would buy it, without a single glance at the price tag. Fantastic work.

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 Post subject: Re: Raven and a Falcon re-paint
PostPosted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 11:35 am 
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Thanks Guys I was going to do a basic Falcon repaint in Black until I came across the GIJ Retaliation viper with the gas mask and cool extras. Then the light wnet on and I started head swaping.
DarkJedi I must admit I am on the fance about the third member, but the Seahawk idea is interesting. Don't want to be the NFL-ish (but I guess it's too late for that).
So either Eagle, Hawk(Seahawk perhaps) or Condor.....matbe Raptor?

Need some input, what say you JC?

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 Post subject: Re: Raven and a Falcon re-paint
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Raptor. Obviously.

Like you needed to ask.

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 Post subject: Re: Raven and a Falcon re-paint
PostPosted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 2:00 pm 
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raptor wrote:
Raptor. Obviously.

Like you needed to ask.

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Ok so I know who you are pulling for Raptor......... :shifty:

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 Post subject: Re: Raven and a Falcon re-paint
PostPosted: Fri Apr 19, 2013 12:55 am 
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That Seahawk Idea is money! Both look great!

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 Post subject: Re: Raven and a Falcon re-paint
PostPosted: Sun Apr 21, 2013 10:19 am 
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MobileBattleBunker wrote:
That Seahawk Idea is money! Both look great!


Maybe I should take a poll?

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