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 Post subject: Cobra Reborn sample chapter
PostPosted: Sun May 18, 2014 4:20 pm 
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A few years ago I had a dio-series running called Cobra Reborn... but it sort of petered out when I realized I didn't have the set customizing skills needed to do it the way I wanted. But now, Amazon Kindle Worlds and Hasbro are letting people self-publish GI Joe stories... so I've but the first part of Cobra Reborn up there. Here's a chapter from it, let me know what you think...

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 Post subject: Re: Cobra Reborn sample chapter
PostPosted: Sun May 18, 2014 11:08 pm 
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That's a good read.

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 Post subject: Re: Cobra Reborn sample chapter
PostPosted: Mon May 19, 2014 8:36 am 
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Thanks!

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 Post subject: Re: Cobra Reborn sample chapter
PostPosted: Mon May 19, 2014 3:00 pm 
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Very nice. Definitely interested in reading more.


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 Post subject: Re: Cobra Reborn sample chapter
PostPosted: Sat May 31, 2014 2:30 pm 
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If anyone is interested, Book II is chugging along... here's the chapter list:

Chapter 1: Who Watches the Dreadnoks
Chapter 2: Knock-Off
Chapter 3: Bring Out the Dead
Chapter 4: Destro
Chapter 5: Daniel
Chapter 6: Biggest Regret
Chapter 7: Panic
Chapter 8: Old Mistakes
Chapter 9: Kill Your Darlings
Chapter 10: Cobra Reborn
Epilogue 1
Epilogue 2
Epilogue 3

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 Post subject: Re: Cobra Reborn sample chapter
PostPosted: Mon Jun 30, 2014 8:23 pm 
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Mid-July

COBRA REBORN BOOK II: The Baroness wants to know exactly what Dr. Mindbender did to her... but if she wants to find out from Cobra Commander, she better act soon: Destro and Zartan each have their own plans to kill the Commander, and one of them just might succeed. The Dreadnoks have a new leader, and Zarana isn't happy about it. Dr. Mindbender makes contact with the dead. Firefly blows stuff up.
Everyone has an agenda, and they are all coming together at an event on Cobra Island. When it's over, Cobra will be reborn... but what will it look like when the dust settles? And will they all realize they are just pieces in a larger game? No one emerges unscathed, and some don't survive, but G.I. Joe will soon have their hands full like never before... dealing with Cobra Reborn.

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 Post subject: Re: Cobra Reborn sample chapter
PostPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2014 8:38 pm 
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It's up! Check the 'Look Inside' for the whole first chapter... http://www.amazon.com/G-I-JOE-G-I-Joe-REBORN-Novella-ebook/dp/B00LT0VNCE/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1405384534&sr=8-2&keywords=cobra+reborn

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 Post subject: Re: Cobra Reborn sample chapter
PostPosted: Mon Jul 14, 2014 10:17 pm 
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Well done. Glad to see someone making use of the Amazon offering.

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 Post subject: Re: Cobra Reborn sample chapter
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A sample from book II

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