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sgcaper
 Post subject: ATR updates.
PostPosted: Mon May 11, 2015 12:07 pm 
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I noticed the fanfic / dio section was gone and walked about it. I was told that critiques now included that section. As such I'm posting about the updates to the ATR story here.

Today's updates include a new chapter. Chapter 72 The Flagg Falls

http://www.allthatremainsbeyond.com/app ... lagg-falls

And an updated dossier for Captain Caveman.

http://www.allthatremainsbeyond.com/app ... ?page=last

Look for further updates in this thread.

I have 2 more chapter going up. One mid week and one next Monday. I'm going to try and get on a posting schedule. I also have a couple dios in the works for the story so check back for updates.

Mods if I misunderstood the info given feel free to move or delete this thread. Thanks.

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 Post subject: Re: ATR updates.
PostPosted: Tue May 12, 2015 8:26 pm 
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New chapter today.

http://www.allthatremainsbeyond.com/app ... -s-dilemma

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 Post subject: Re: ATR updates.
PostPosted: Thu May 14, 2015 4:12 pm 
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I don't know how I missed this before. I really like the stories. When I make customs a lot of times there is a back story in my head. great idea using the customs as well. Books are better with pictures lol. Great job on them as well. I just wanted you to know I have really been enjoying reading them.
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 Post subject: Re: ATR updates.
PostPosted: Thu May 14, 2015 9:37 pm 
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Thanks man. Glad you're enjoying them. There's more on the way.

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 Post subject: Re: ATR updates.
PostPosted: Sat May 16, 2015 2:54 pm 
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Just a short 1 page dio update on the Snow Serpents seen back in 2014. I didn't get the chance to complete the whole story as I'm missing some vital parts so the plan is to finish next winter. Till then an added teaser.

http://www.allthatremainsbeyond.com/app ... w-serpents

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 Post subject: Re: ATR updates.
PostPosted: Sun May 17, 2015 4:12 pm 
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Another update.

http://www.allthatremainsbeyond.com/app ... ra-uncoils

Time to see what the men of Vipers' Nest are up to.

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 Post subject: Re: ATR updates.
PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2015 7:07 pm 
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Okay folks, haven't been getting any feedback so I don't know what people want to read.

Are there any storylines you'd like to see continued next or want more of?

I ask because I have quite a few things written up between new dossiers and chapters but I would like to put up what people who've been reading want to know about.

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PostPosted: Wed May 20, 2015 11:47 pm 
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I like what I've read so far. I have always liked the Overlord. I would love to see him leading some small remnant faction of the coil, Russian Spetsnaz style. Also I loved what you did with the nemesis enforcers. Simon says was a great touch.
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 Post subject: Re: ATR updates.
PostPosted: Thu May 21, 2015 6:10 pm 
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Darth BDR wrote:
I like what I've read so far. I have always liked the Overlord. I would love to see him leading some small remnant faction of the coil, Russian Spetsnaz style. Also I loved what you did with the nemesis enforcers. Simon says was a great touch.


Thank you for the feedback.

I haven't ever thought of including Overlord until now. I like that idea. I'll see what I can come up with.

Thanks. I knew I wanted the Nemesis Enforcer but I didn't want it the way it was in the movie.

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