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 Post subject: Ashiko (Every Joe #69)
PostPosted: Sun Feb 16, 2020 10:19 pm 

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#69 Ashiko

The Scott Bernard wanna-be of 2012, this is Ashiko. Unlike the Hasbro figure, which steals blatantly from Mospeada/Robotech, this artwork is based on my custom of the character. It retains some armored elements, plus a motorcycle helmet.


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 Post subject: Re: Ashiko (Every Joe #69)
PostPosted: Sun Feb 16, 2020 11:39 pm 
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pretty slick, I think he looks a lot like a real world major blood.

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 Post subject: Re: Ashiko (Every Joe #69)
PostPosted: Wed Feb 19, 2020 11:56 am 

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Thanks!

There's something off with the structure- the forward leg is out of place or too thin at the top. I can't quite put my finger on it, but something's just not right. This might get a re-visit down the road...
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 Post subject: Re: Ashiko (Every Joe #69)
PostPosted: Wed Feb 19, 2020 12:50 pm 
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i'd like to see it "flipped" like the wip pics you showed me before. i'm on a new device so i'm not sure how i could do it.

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 Post subject: Re: Ashiko (Every Joe #69)
PostPosted: Fri Feb 21, 2020 10:16 am 

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Here's a flipped version. Still looks off.


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 Post subject: Re: Ashiko (Every Joe #69)
PostPosted: Fri Feb 21, 2020 7:13 pm 
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yea you are right. the head/face looks better flipped though.

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