Great as always. Seeing all the background details in each shot really puts the great storytelling over the top. I especially like seeing the rusted leg screw on the Eel, hehe, that makes it authentic.
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| Author: | General Hawk [ Sun Mar 02, 2008 11:49 am ] |
| Post subject: | Dio update at GeneralsJoes |
Well, a slight medical issue delayed the progress on my dio a bit, but Episode 6 of Ghosts is now online! Also, Self-Modifier, who has crafted a very fun G.I. Joe/Transformers story (originally hosted on JoeDios) has begun progress on the final part of his trilogy! It's also up in the G.I. Joe and the Transformers section. Make sure to check the recap (or just read the past installments) to get caught up. It's an awesome story with some pretty seamless special effects and awesome Joe and Transformers action. Enjoy! |
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| Author: | Dosser [ Sun Mar 02, 2008 1:59 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dio update at GeneralsJoes |
Great as always. Seeing all the background details in each shot really puts the great storytelling over the top. I especially like seeing the rusted leg screw on the Eel, hehe, that makes it authentic.
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| Author: | Kilcarr [ Sun Mar 02, 2008 3:20 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dio update at GeneralsJoes |
Oh , when will you learn? A great update as usual. I'm totally psyched for the next one. |
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| Author: | Keenan [ Sun Mar 02, 2008 5:15 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dio update at GeneralsJoes |
Nice set up. |
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| Author: | Stalker [ Mon Mar 03, 2008 4:09 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dio update at GeneralsJoes |
Really terrific! My kind of story!!! Great cast and setups! |
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| Author: | Cap [ Tue Mar 04, 2008 3:36 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dio update at GeneralsJoes |
Yea! Finally got some sitdown time. What a tease! I smell something brewing......something big. Excellent teasing there Justin. |
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| Author: | Blitzkrieg [ Sun Mar 09, 2008 11:51 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dio update at GeneralsJoes |
Very good chapter, Justin. I have a few questions. 1) Is Hit & Run's hair gray due to stress or just to distinguish him from Tracker? 2) Did Lt. Falcon check in with Psyche-Out, or was Beach-Head's recommendation enough for Falcon? 3) Who is the Joe in the camoflauge body paint (in the background, not Hit & Run) being briefed by Lt. Falcon? Is it Grunt? Looking forward to the next installment. Blitzkrieg |
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| Author: | Tim Elf [ Thu Mar 13, 2008 10:16 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dio update at GeneralsJoes |
Great stuff as usual. One minor critique, based partly on what Blitzkrieg just asked: Any time you use a figure that is custom in any way, you need to have someone immediately call him by name. Don't assume that everyone recognizes your customs. I THOUGHT that was Hit & Run when he first appeared, but I wasn't sure because of the gray hair. And Falcon just called him "soldier" and "son," so I wasn't completely sure until the vague references to what he'd been through. Same thing with the Cobra guy. Is that Razorclaw? With different arms, I can't be sure. And no one called him by name. (And if it IS Razorclaw, aren't his blades surgically attached? Otherwise, how could they be held in place on his arms?) |
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| Author: | zedhatch [ Thu Mar 13, 2008 10:44 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dio update at GeneralsJoes |
I have to agree on the Hit and Run thing, I wasn't sure either, other than that a fine chapter. |
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| Author: | General Hawk [ Thu Mar 13, 2008 10:58 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dio update at GeneralsJoes |
Hey, guys, thanks a ton for your feedback! Hit & Run appears pretty much as he has appeared throughout my dio-story...I've always used the Tracker head and arms, but you guys are right, it's been a long time since he appeared that way (in Retaliation) so I will absolutely be better about identifying those guys as they appear. Tim, in my world, Razorclaw's gloves are grafted through his sleeves by circuitry and steel reinforcements. That's probably something I should explain, too...  Blitz, yeah Falcon did check with Psyche Out and got clearance on Hit & Run's mental state, just didn't know if everyone needed to see that phone conversation. Grunt is the guy you're thinking of, yeah. Thanks again, guys, love the constructive criticism, it helps a lot. Justin |
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