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 Post subject: 25th Alley Viper team, WIP
PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:53 am 
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Hi guys, Im pretty new to customizing, these are my first attempts. I learned a lot from making these (lots of mistakes)
Anyways here are some pics and profiles. I still have 2 (maybe more) to make.


The Team (I have no clue what to call the team, any suggestions?)
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http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q307/NeoDragonKnight/alleyviperteam1.jpg

Name: Blitz
Former Unit: GSG 9

Blitz is the team leader. Calm, collected and proffesional, Blitz is a born leader and is the teams best room assaulter. His percision aim is lightning quick and he can down several targets with headshots in a few seconds.

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Name: The Painter
Former Unit: GIGN

Second in command, and the teams Sniper and Radio Op. Killing is an art for The Painter, whether he expertly and silently clears out sniping spots with his silenced MAC10, or splattering/painting walls with the blood of his targets from afar with his high powered sniper rifle. Because The Painter is usually in points of vantage he is given the responsibility to relay enemy positions via radio, coordinate assaults, call in support and relay messages to command.

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Name: Street Sweeper
Former Unit: Navy SEALS

The teams machine gunner. Equiped with a 50 cal machine gun, extra heavy and reinforced body armor, Street Sweeper is expect to fire his machine gun even without the benefit of cover. He is also equiped with an MP5 and pistol for situations where a cumbersome machinegun is ill advised.

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just a comparisson of what he was before I added more gear to him. Im surprised how adding some gear to his shoulders and sides really made his armor not stick out as much.
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q307/NeoDragonKnight/customalley4.jpg


Name: Mouse-Holer
Former Unit: JTF2 (Joint Task Force 2)

The teams demolitions expert. Named after the urban technique perfected by Canadians in the battle of Ortona, of blowing holes through walls to assault a room. Mouse-Holer is covered in explosives and has enough to bring down buildings. His team desperately tries to protect Mouse-Holer, though not because they particularly care for him, but because he has rigged his explosives to explode when his heart stops and take out any enemies that kill him (and his comrades who might be in the area in the process).

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I was going to give him the traditional Alley Viper 1 visor but I liked how much the painted Flash Visor looked so I just kept it. What do you think? Add a Alley viper visor or keep this one?

WIP and Future team members

Name: Panzer?
Former Unit: GSG 9? GIS?
Teams heavyily armored room assault specialist. First into a room his job is to absorb as much damage away from his team as possible during an assault.

Name: ????
Former Unit: SAS? Spetznaz?
Maybe the teams close quarters combat specialist, shotgun and heavy vest and shield. Maybe just another assault trooper. Maybe a night viper turned alley viper for dark rooms. Maybe an anti armor/vehicle specialist


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 Post subject: Re: 25th Alley Viper team, WIP
PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 11:05 am 
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Those look great. My only critique is with the last shield. I think if it were painted it would look better. Right now it kinda looks like a truck door.

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 Post subject: Re: 25th Alley Viper team, WIP
PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 4:46 pm 

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WOW what a great team! sorry cant help with a name but i do really like them! :-D

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 Post subject: Re: 25th Alley Viper team, WIP
PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 7:54 pm 

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pretty neat. I like the last guy(mouse) the best. The leader looks too much like firefly, he needs some more mods to differenciate but they are good,
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 Post subject: Re: 25th Alley Viper team, WIP
PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 9:35 pm 
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For that last guy, perhaps you could go with something like this:

Name: Sticky Bomb

Named for the improvised anti-tank bomb of the World War 2 era. He is officially the anti-vehicle specialist but he can improvise in any situation and fix a broken M-16 with a toothpick and a lighter.

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 Post subject: Re: 25th Alley Viper team, WIP
PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:22 pm 
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Tanstoys wrote:
pretty neat. I like the last guy(mouse) the best. The leader looks too much like firefly, he needs some more mods to differenciate but they are good,
Tim


thanks for the comments guys.
that was my biggest worry actually, that he was too much like FF. Was thinking of painting his mask black and maybe add some elbow and knee pads, but wasnt sure if the helm would fit after painting the mask.


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