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Robulus
 Post subject: Zoe Washburne of Serenity
PostPosted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 6:14 pm 
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I've been having a blast making these serenity customs and I've got some great feedback, thanks guys. I'm in the middle of a reaver now and in the down time(damn paint drying) I threw together a Zoe. Pretty simple custom but i think it works to fill out the crew. More on the way guys. Reaver and "wash"


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Iron Will
 Post subject: Re: Zoe Washburne of Serenity
PostPosted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 6:34 pm 
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Nice, another dead on custom!

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 Post subject: Re: Zoe Washburne of Serenity
PostPosted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:47 pm 
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Great all around.

Have you shown Jayne without the hat?
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 Post subject: Re: Zoe Washburne of Serenity
PostPosted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:06 pm 
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iwbeta wrote:

Have you shown Jayne without the hat?



Yes but The hat makes the custom i think. I went with a few heads before making the hat and it really brings out his character more with it I think.

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 Post subject: Re: Zoe Washburne of Serenity
PostPosted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:49 pm 
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i think your colors are spot on, but i wish you would have put more curl in her hair somehow --

also, i think you should have filled the hole in her shoulder before painting her up -- maybe a jacket is in order?

i'm really digging these!

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 Post subject: Re: Zoe Washburne of Serenity
PostPosted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 12:15 am 
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I'm still seeing Scarlett, but I'm not sure how to make that particular look go away. The coloring is on, but it needs something else to be Zoe...

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 Post subject: Re: Zoe Washburne of Serenity
PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 1:09 pm 
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raptor wrote:
I'm still seeing Scarlett, but I'm not sure how to make that particular look go away. The coloring is on, but it needs something else to be Zoe...

- R


I agree, she screams Scarlett to me also. not sure why, but i just can't get a Zoe feel from her. maybe broader shoulders?

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 Post subject: Re: Zoe Washburne of Serenity
PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:50 pm 
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Maybe if she had the Serafina Pekkala's curly locks? Maybe that might remove the Scarlett feel. I'm liking her, maybe a touch fuller lips might break the Scarlett look too. But I'm loving the ensemble.

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