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Iron Will
 Post subject: Updated Optimus Prime 11/22 - Page 2
PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2012 11:34 pm 
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With all the scale Transformers running around here, I thought they needed a liason to the human race! So I had originally planned to make Roller with Spike, but I was soooo in awe of Keenan's scaled Prime's that I decided to give it a go! Thanks to him for the pep pm s and all the questions he answered about it. This one still isn't finished yet:

To Do:
Sculpt higher ear pieces
Smoke Stacks
Wheels to legs
Gas Tanks
Waist details and paint
Autobot logo
Redo Right Shoulder

I plan on doing a second one down the road and fine tuning what I learned from this one!

Very excited to have this in my 3.75 scale verse!! Thanks a ton Keenan!!


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night force cynic
 Post subject: Re: Spike Witwicky (WIP)
PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2012 12:17 am 
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Heyyy, that looks nothing like Shia Lebouf! :-P


Kick ass work so far, great recipe
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Greyryder
 Post subject: Re: Spike Witwicky - Completed 10/6
PostPosted: Sat Oct 06, 2012 9:11 pm 
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Bit tougher looking, than I remember Spike. Should mean no more shrill cries to the Autobots for "HEEEEeeeeEEEEEeeeeeelllLLP!"

Snarky comments about the 80's cartoon aside, I really like the look of him. Something about his face makes him look like he'd be willing to throw down with the 'Cons, whether the Autobots were there to back him up, or not.

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 Post subject: Re: Spike Witwicky - Completed 10/6
PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2012 12:44 pm 
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I like the build but it looks like he has three different skintones on his face, neck, and arms.
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 Post subject: Re: Spike Witwicky - Completed 10/6
PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2012 9:54 am 
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good job really like him....Sparkplug next please.

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Iron Will
 Post subject: Re: Spike Witwicky - Completed 10/6
PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2012 10:52 pm 
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deadfish wrote:
good job really like him....Sparkplug next please.


Thanks! No plans for Sparkplug currently but Spike will be getting 2 big accessories to go along with him!

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 Post subject: Re: Spike Witwicky - Completed 10/6
PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2012 12:08 am 
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Iron Will wrote:
deadfish wrote:
good job really like him....Sparkplug next please.


Thanks! No plans for Sparkplug currently but Spike will be getting 2 big accessories to go along with him!


Oh, now THIS is intriguing.

Very nice work on this. Almost feels like the animated movie version.
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unknownsoldier13
 Post subject: Re: Spike Witwicky - Completed 10/6
PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2012 9:33 am 
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Is this Spike from the 84 movie? This looks awesome!!!!
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Iron Will
 Post subject: Re: Spike, Wheelie and Optimus (Thanks to Keenan) 10/13
PostPosted: Sat Oct 13, 2012 8:29 pm 
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Additional pics.


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 Post subject: Re: Spike, Wheelie and Optimus (Thanks to Keenan) 10/13
PostPosted: Sat Oct 13, 2012 8:47 pm 
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Until you guys start making these things transform able, I remain underwhelmed...NOT!

Seriously cool stuff, man!
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Iron Will
 Post subject: Re: Spike, Wheelie and Optimus (Thanks to Keenan) 10/13
PostPosted: Sat Oct 13, 2012 8:57 pm 
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Spin Doctor wrote:
Until you guys start making these things transform able, I remain underwhelmed...NOT!

Seriously cool stuff, man!


Lol!

One more pic!


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 Post subject: Re: Spike, Wheelie and Optimus (Thanks to Keenan) 10/13
PostPosted: Sat Oct 13, 2012 9:10 pm 
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Great things going on here! Who needs them to transform, as long as they kick ass!

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 Post subject: Re: Spike, Wheelie and Optimus (Thanks to Keenan) 10/13
PostPosted: Sat Oct 13, 2012 9:13 pm 
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Wheelie is a great touch. Just when I thought I didn't need to track one of those down too.

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 Post subject: Re: Spike, Wheelie and Optimus (Thanks to Keenan) 10/13
PostPosted: Sat Oct 13, 2012 9:33 pm 
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Point of fact: That is Roller, not Wheelie. Wheelie was the obnoxious orange guy, that spoke in rhymes. I do really like that Roller, though. It's a good Joe vehicle take on it.

Spin, I could start posting up some of the custom TFs I used to make, before I got into Joe customizing.

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 Post subject: Re: Spike, Wheelie and Optimus (Thanks to Keenan) 10/13
PostPosted: Sat Oct 13, 2012 10:35 pm 

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prime and roller look good sofar
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