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Oneforceleader
 Post subject: Oneforce - Alley Cat, Deep Cover and Spartan or Sentry
PostPosted: Tue Apr 02, 2013 10:27 am 
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So Ihave been working on this one for a while trying to find the right parts to make it kick butt, but not over the top. I tried to keep it simple.

Memo: To Director Vinyard, the Allry Cat is ready to roll. Motorhead has mad the final modification on the vehicle it is ready to be field tested. Send out 1st strike to conduct the the field test. Target and location will be send sent via pricte Oneforce communications. Vine this is super hush hush, the success of this test is crucial.

Here are the specs; The base vehicle is a old Joe Snow cat that has seen its better days. Motorhead was able to aquire it for the Joe scrap yard for next to nothing. He has equipped it with a Machine gun turet where it is opperated from the bed of the Cat. It has dual Turbo boosters on the rear tail for extra fast exits. There are dual mini missle launchers on both sides of the nose. He also added a gatlin gun underneith the nose of the Cat. The main engine is a hybrid jet turbine from a Firebat. Lastly there ie a stae of the art on board computer system complet with a global GPS system, WiFi and a right side laser cannon. The Alley Cat carries a 3 man team and up to 6 when necessary.

End Memo: Oneforceleader.
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Oneforceleader
 Post subject: Re: Oneforce - Alley Cat
PostPosted: Tue Apr 02, 2013 10:29 am 
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A few more Pics
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Oneforceleader
 Post subject: Deep Cover
PostPosted: Tue Apr 02, 2013 11:07 am 
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Just kind of stumbled on to this custom while trying some different heads (Head Swaping) and for a LBC Ithought it turned out OK. I may go back detail him but for now I'm good.

Deep Cover: A highly trained killer, spy, intelligence specialist, fluent in 6 languages including Arabic, Hindi, Spanish, French, Portuguese and Japanese(3 dialects)
Deep Cover is a master of disguise and has successfully completed over 25 missions in the Asia, South America and the Middle East and India. Is current where a bouts and mission are unknown…except to Oneforceleader. His real identity is unknown to anyone no except the man who brought him in….Oneforceleader.
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 Post subject: Re: Deep Cover
PostPosted: Tue Apr 02, 2013 11:11 am 
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He's Big Brawler, but way less :brawlin: . The kind of intel agent that doesn't run up and attack everything himself.

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pluv
 Post subject: Re: Oneforce - Alley Cat
PostPosted: Tue Apr 02, 2013 11:47 am 
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Nice. Are those jet boosters on the side now? good detailing on the consoles on the back. Are you going to put a missile in that launcher or is it supposed to be a cannon? If it is just a cannon, you might want to paint the inside of the barrel.

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Oneforceleader
 Post subject: Re: Oneforce - Alley Cat
PostPosted: Tue Apr 02, 2013 1:32 pm 
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pluv wrote:
Nice. Are those jet boosters on the side now? good detailing on the consoles on the back. Are you going to put a missile in that launcher or is it supposed to be a cannon? If it is just a cannon, you might want to paint the inside of the barrel.

Yep Jet Booters and I forgot about the inside of the Laser cannon barrell. Got fix that. I also need to run wires to the laser cannon as well.

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Oneforceleader
 Post subject: Re: Deep Cover
PostPosted: Tue Apr 02, 2013 2:36 pm 
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raptor wrote:
He's Big Brawler, but way less :brawlin: . The kind of intel agent that doesn't run up and attack everything himself.

- R

LOL right I should amke up some disguises to go with the bio.

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 Post subject: Re: Oneforce - Alley Cat
PostPosted: Tue Apr 02, 2013 3:04 pm 
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Pretty Futuristic, I dig it.

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Oneforceleader
 Post subject: Sentry or Spartan
PostPosted: Tue Apr 02, 2013 3:04 pm 
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Still working on a bio but this custom jsut looked like it should be called either Sentry or Spartan.
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xhairs
 Post subject: Re: Deep Cover
PostPosted: Tue Apr 02, 2013 3:51 pm 
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i can dig it.

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Blakwulf
 Post subject: Re: Oneforce - Alley Cat
PostPosted: Wed Apr 03, 2013 12:05 am 
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NICE!!

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Blakwulf
 Post subject: Re: Sentry or Spartan
PostPosted: Wed Apr 03, 2013 12:07 am 
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Sweet!! More pics though. . .

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Shakka85
 Post subject: Re: Sentry or Spartan
PostPosted: Wed Apr 03, 2013 12:28 am 
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Blakwulf wrote:
Sweet!! More pics though. . .


What he said, with a little more light...

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geminicrazy
 Post subject: Re: Sentry or Spartan
PostPosted: Wed Apr 03, 2013 6:28 am 
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I would go with Sentry
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 Post subject: Re: Deep Cover
PostPosted: Wed Apr 03, 2013 5:06 pm 

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Seems like an Agent Faces custom to me. Nicely done.
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