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 Post subject: Sputnik and the NJC # 75
PostPosted: Sat Jan 04, 2014 12:20 pm 
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I just wanted to put these out here and see if anyone had any feedback for me... I'm overall pretty happy with how they all came out, though they were pretty rushed there at the end and I'm sure I cut a few corners.

First up is Clark Kent, who I find infinitely more interesting than Superman.

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Once I figured out the rules for the challenge, I decided to go ahead and make a Power Girl and her secret identity as well, but only because the parts I needed fell right into my lap. JM70 sent me the Padme body I would use, and Kilcarr sent me to legs. I'm still not happy with my sculpting ability, but the Teflon tape worked out pretty well for the upper part if her costume.

Still not satisfied with my skirt-work in the civilian version, either, so that's something I'll need to work on.

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So what am I missing? Any input?

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 Post subject: Re: Sputnik and the NJC # 75
PostPosted: Sat Jan 04, 2014 12:29 pm 
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I think the Power Girl uniform needs the cut out to be on the upper side of the...bewbs...rather than right on the front. On the upper slope, if you will.

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 Post subject: Re: Sputnik and the NJC # 75
PostPosted: Sat Jan 04, 2014 12:38 pm 
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Yeah the boob window should be higher up her chest, not in the front like you have it.

Also I'd go ahead and make her panty line go fully down the hips. I get what you were going for with the high-hipped thong look but on the figure the hips look awkward.

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 Post subject: Re: Sputnik and the NJC # 75
PostPosted: Sat Jan 04, 2014 1:33 pm 
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raise the window and smooth out the flesh sculpt just a bit before repainting.

lower the neck on her civvy version. Consider swapping out the lower legs with MU lowers (keep the Baroness heels however). that skirt is fantastic though. Hard to do that and have it look properly scaled.

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