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Blood Brigade
 Post subject: Serpentor’s Sea Sled.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 13, 2022 1:55 am 
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Wanted to create something that looked kind of like a Roman Chariot and a boat. So I came up with this. Image
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harlie
 Post subject: Re: Serpentor’s Sea Sled.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 13, 2022 2:34 am 
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Very smooth work. I could see myself buying this in the store.

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DarkJedi
 Post subject: Re: Serpentor’s Sea Sled.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 13, 2022 6:53 am 
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I feel like it needs some fangs, like the vanes from one of those Clone speeder bikes.

Kinda of like giving it a tongue to connect to horses going with your chariot idea.

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Blood Brigade
 Post subject: Re: Serpentor’s Sea Sled.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 13, 2022 2:06 pm 
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DarkJedi wrote:
I feel like it needs some fangs, like the vanes from one of those Clone speeder bikes.

Kinda of like giving it a tongue to connect to horses going with your chariot idea.

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I actually really wanted to use the 25 th snake head with the open mouth.


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alleyviperelite
 Post subject: Re: Serpentor’s Sea Sled.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 13, 2022 7:05 pm 
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I love it, looks like something Kenny Powers would have at Myrtle Beach

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 Post subject: Re: Serpentor’s Sea Sled.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 13, 2022 8:52 pm 
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Another great build

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Mystere
 Post subject: Re: Serpentor’s Sea Sled.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2022 11:04 am 
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Serpentor needs to go in style on the sea too! great custom. Which is the base and side top jets, which I can't recognize? Action Force vehicle maybe?

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past nastification
 Post subject: Re: Serpentor’s Sea Sled.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 16, 2022 10:29 pm 

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This is the one time where I'll throw out a critique of your beautiful machines.

Since the sled matches Serpentor's armor/uniform, pulling some matching green from the cape onto the sled sides would lock him in even more. But, let's be honest, it's already awesome.
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Blood Brigade
 Post subject: Re: Serpentor’s Sea Sled.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 17, 2022 7:13 pm 
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past nastification wrote:
This is the one time where I'll throw out a critique of your beautiful machines.

Since the sled matches Serpentor's armor/uniform, pulling some matching green from the cape onto the sled sides would lock him in even more. But, let's be honest, it's already awesome.
I don’t like Matchy Matchy, plus when you do that if you do thaf and it doesn’t match perfectly it just looks dumb. Also that was my only green lol


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past nastification
 Post subject: Re: Serpentor’s Sea Sled.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 19, 2022 2:50 pm 

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I'm claiming "Matchy Matchy" for a figure name.
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